Well, honestly , this stuff is so subjective- I think its a really strong image, esp judging it from a jpg. I like the composition, solid and inventive, this sort of hulking shape with these long fingers. Works for me. Again, its all preference. Some people hate Jackson Pollock, others like me love 'em.
I think what I really like about both of them are the expressive quality of the drawings. Im a sucker for German Expressionism and Jay's HOF posters strike me as a contemporary updating of some of those old etchings and drawings. This one is so creepy yet gentle...Like a Kathe Köllitz compostion. I think its a pretty creative use of the skeleton with the exaggerated hand bones. To each his own, of course.